The campaign description of the crowd funding campaign to resurrect ADOM development

Once more I'd like to thank everyone who so far has provided input on the planned campaign and helped to improve my plans. It's highly appreciated! Since this worked so well for pledge levels (and the general campaign ideas) and folks suggested it I'm now posting my current campaign description for discussion. It's again a text I have changed about a hundred times by now and I have lost my personal impressions... I no longer am able to judge it appropriately. Please comment, provide feedback and criticism, etc. as I'd like it to be the best description possible.